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One Time at the Park
  • jaymoney
  • Miscellany / Other
  • 5 views
  • 10 years ago


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  • Is It Interesting? 3 Vote(s)
    76.6666666667%
  • Are the sentences smooth? 3 Vote(s)
    73.3333333333%
  • Is the narrative voice appropriate? 3 Vote(s)
    73.3333333333%
  • Are the word choices good? 3 Vote(s)
    73.3333333333%
  • Is the dialogue believable (if any)? 3 Vote(s)
    10%