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Girl in the Diner
  • User DAlvares
  • General Fiction / Thriller/Suspense
  • 12 views
  • 3 years ago


Writer Notes

Just working on the opening paragraph. Tell me what you think.

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  • Is It Interesting? 2 Vote(s)
    95%
  • Are the sentences smooth? 2 Vote(s)
    95%
  • Is the narrative voice appropriate? 2 Vote(s)
    100%
  • Are the word choices good? 2 Vote(s)
    95%
  • Is the dialogue believable (if any)? 2 Vote(s)
    55%