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the cycle of light and dark
  • McPimpy
  • Poetry / Life & Death
  • 4 views
  • 4 years ago


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its a good poem read and critique

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  • Will

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  • Is It Interesting? 1 Vote(s)
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  • Are the sentences smooth? 1 Vote(s)
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  • Is the narrative voice appropriate? 1 Vote(s)
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  • Are the word choices good? 1 Vote(s)
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  • Is the dialogue believable (if any)? 1 Vote(s)
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