WRITE IT . . . SHARE IT . . . HEAR IT BACK
a time
  • McPimpy
  • Poetry / Other
  • 2 views
  • 10 years ago


Writer Notes

just a poem read and critique

Listen to the Reader

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Poll Results

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  • Is It Interesting? 1 Vote(s)
    100%
  • Are the sentences smooth? 1 Vote(s)
    80%
  • Is the narrative voice appropriate? 1 Vote(s)
    70%
  • Are the word choices good? 1 Vote(s)
    70%
  • Is the dialogue believable (if any)? 1 Vote(s)
    10%