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a poem about the human condition hope you enjoy it
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Darkness
By: McPimpy
We all have darkness in our hearts
We try our best not to show it
So we go back to the start
We just try to get through the grit
The darkness eventually takes over
Whether for a few seconds or minutes
Most of us find a four leaf clover
To combat the darkness
For some of us we go in the embrace
Just trying to not go insane
To others we are a disgrace
They just feel we are to blame
In reality they could do the same
But they have chosen to fight
They are afraid of the shame
So they put us away with delight
The ones like us go through life
But we still get mocked
Their words cut through us like a knife
And they get shocked
When we go to extreme means
We didn't want to
But its in our genes
They pushed us to the edge.
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